Part V Writing
寫作指導(dǎo)
這是一篇描寫文 (Description)。用通俗的話說，描寫文就是用文字給人物、地點(diǎn)、景物畫象。一篇描寫文主要是通過所感受的細(xì)節(jié)——所見所聞發(fā)展而來的。在寫人 時(shí)，不僅僅要用細(xì)節(jié)描寫其外貌，而要注重通過他的言行來表現(xiàn)其人物性格、思想和品德，更要抓住他區(qū)別于他人的性格特點(diǎn)，這樣就容易給讀者留下深刻的印象。短文的第一、二段敘述故事發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，故事發(fā)生的原因及故事所涉及的人物。文章的三、四、五段描寫的是人物的外貌，穿著及性格特點(diǎn)。通過對(duì)人物言行 的簡(jiǎn)單描寫來揭示主人翁的助人為樂的高尚精神。短文的最后一段，要用一句話概括作者對(duì)主人翁的看法： A good guy。文章有描述，有議論，要加敘加議，有血有肉，上下文連貫要緊密，首尾要呼應(yīng)，人和事要給人們留下深刻印象。
Sample Writing
The First Impression of My Roommate
It was my first day at the institute. I got into the building where I was going to live, and looked door after door for my name. At last I found it. In the room, there was already a student making his bed. After we said “how do you do?” to each other, he continued his work, paying no more attention to me. I looked around the room and found that it had been thoroughly cleaned. No doubt it was he who had done it.I looked at him. He was thin, short and dark. His hair was like a bundle of straw. His dirty clothes and tired look told me that he had had a long journey. His clothes were made of cheap cloth, and he wore a pair of rubber shoes, which were very unfashionable. He was not a very smart freshmen at all.
The second time he spoke, his accent told me that he was from the south. “Shall I help you to get your luggage from the office?”
I did not refuse since I really needed help. He was quick in movement. He walked out of the room and was soon far ahead of me to the office.
“A good guy,”I said to myself.“I will make friends with him ”,and I hurried and caught up with him.
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PartVWriting
寫作指導(dǎo)
這是一篇描寫文(Description)。用通俗的話說，描寫文就是用文字給人物、地點(diǎn)、景物畫象。一篇描寫文主要是通過所感受的細(xì)節(jié)——所見所聞發(fā)展而來的。在寫人時(shí)，不僅僅要用細(xì)節(jié)描寫其外貌，而要注重通過他的言行來表現(xiàn)其人物性格、思想和品德，更要抓住他區(qū)別于他人的性格特點(diǎn)，這樣就容易給讀者留下深刻的印象。短文的第一、二段敘述故事發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，故事發(fā)生的原因及故事所涉及的人物。文章的三、四、五段描寫的是人物的外貌，穿著及性格特點(diǎn)。通過對(duì)人物言行的簡(jiǎn)單描寫來揭示主人翁的助人為樂的高尚精神。短文的最后一段，要用一句話概括作者對(duì)主人翁的看法：Agoodguy。文章有描述，有議論，要加敘加議，有血有肉，上下文連貫要緊密，首尾要呼應(yīng)，人和事要給人們留下深刻印象。
Whiledoingcalculationfortheproject,thedesigners____anewsolutiontoageologicalproblem.
翻譯：
幾千年的中國(guó)文化充實(shí)著中國(guó)夢(mèng)，同時(shí)，過去三十幾年的改革開放也激勵(lì)著中國(guó)夢(mèng)。中國(guó)夢(mèng)最顯著的特征是包容性和雙贏合作。這些也是使中國(guó)夢(mèng)擴(kuò)大它的全球影響范圍和被其他國(guó)家的人民認(rèn)可的基本特征。中國(guó)夢(mèng)是民族復(fù)興的夢(mèng)。它是建設(shè)一個(gè)強(qiáng)大繁榮的國(guó)家，給中國(guó)人民帶來幸福生活的夢(mèng)。中國(guó)夢(mèng)需要維持穩(wěn)定健康的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，科學(xué)管理社會(huì)，以及有效應(yīng)對(duì)外部發(fā)展的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)和挑戰(zhàn)。
